appeasure

By redscan Posted in — Comments (29) / Email this page » / Leave a comment »

The hope of appeasure is not a change.
Senator Obama has abandoned his principle.

Talk to Ahmadinejad.
Tell him it's his turn to "appease."
He can "appease" us for a "change."

While you're at it, talk to your "liberals"
It's their turn to "appease."
Confirm our judges.

Change?
It's all we'll have left.
His "tax maggots" will eat it all.

You suck at Haiku...No recommend by speciallist


"Yup he sucks.."
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Misplaced attention, poor by Canthros

Misplaced attention,
poor word choice and no structure:
I don't like free verse.

--
This too shall pass.

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as haiku, it sucks by statusquomuststay

but as commentary, it blows.

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What's the ahiku rule? by E Pluribus Unum

Ain't it 5-7-5 syllables? There are other, more subtle rules of what constitutes "good" haiku, but the basics have to be honored.

But hey, I'm amused, it's funny, so I recommend.

Nobody ever accused me of being overly detail-oriented!

Unfair. Unbalanced. Unmedicated. -- IMAO

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Gah! by E Pluribus Unum

haiku! If you are wondering what ahiku is, well, so am I.

Unfair. Unbalanced. Unmedicated. -- IMAO

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ahiku: by statusquomuststay

what this diary is. Dyslexic haiku.

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U, E Pluribus by statusquomuststay

Recommend in spite of rules
for well designed verse.

ha. You convinced me.

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That's 7-5-5 by E Pluribus Unum

But close enough for government work!

Unfair. Unbalanced. Unmedicated. -- IMAO

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d'oh. by statusquomuststay

Subject line is line 1. then 2 lines. That's 5-7-5 (I think).

"Ha... " was the "appendix." I feel the need to "quote" things "here."

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Homework assignment...Go to my Haiku blog by speciallist

n/t

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Yes 5-7-5. BTW, ahiku is Democratic slang for tax policy, by streetwise

so we understand your Freudian slip there....

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As in: by blooch

"You elect me, ahiku taxes."?

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Clearly, you have an ear for literature and policy! nt by streetwise

Obama- you walked into
the party like you were
walking onto a yacht!

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ROTFLMAO!!!! by E Pluribus Unum

Unfair. Unbalanced. Unmedicated. -- IMAO

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ha ha! 5 -nt by absentee

absentee
Also Find Me Here.

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I Made This For You, speciallist by BigGator5

Obama does not approve of your fail Haiku

Join The Revolution!
BigGator5.net
John McCain for 2008!

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Man Pope proclamation... by speciallist

I decree Bigator5 is now...the High King of Haiku..


"Carry on"
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Haikook...stay away by speciallist

Change the tax maggots
It's all we'll have left. stupid
eat the liberals

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oh, c'mon. by statusquomuststay

specialist, please have
compassion, conservative,
redscan is with us.

I can't decide. Is it art? or just crap. If you have to ask, I reckon, you probably know...

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Joke of the Day ....so far...nice one by speciallist

"as haiku, it sucks but as commentary, it blows".....by statusquomuststay

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in re by statusquomuststay

as haiku, it sucks
as commentary, it blows
Art, it sure is not.

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Why was it assumed he meant 'haiku' here (nt) by Neil Stevens

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Easier than composing melodies(nt) by blooch

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What? by blooch

bad meter, redscan
oh yeah again, DarinH
Lost and asking,"What?"

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exactly by Darin H

what what what what what?
what what what what what what what?
what what what what what?



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fiddle now by redscan

"Rome" will be burning in January.

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He's Alive!....Tell us about the Tax maggots.. by speciallist

n/t

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snap snap snap snap by blooch

snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap.

I dig it, hepcat.

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So! An optimist! by Canthros

But laconism befits
the first falling leaf.

--
This too shall pass.

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